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Secrets in the Dark - New Chapter Up

Drum roll please!  dadaddaddadadadda.... um, okay, that was just a figure of speech... *pushes the annoying drummers out of her room and gets a tylenol* Anyway, I finally have the next chapter of Secrets in the Dark done! :)

Secrets in the Dark by Blackened Wing (Zero x Kaname) 
Chapter Thirty-Five: "Blood on the Walls" 


There's a parts of the chapter that don't flow as smoothly as I would like and it's hardly proofed at all, but hopefully you will find it enjoyable anyway.  Nasser finally starts getting his ass kicked :D although of course he doesn't go down easy and will do a lot of kicking of his own along the way.  *winces for poor Zero and Kaname* but on the upside they will end up victorious. :)  It's tough on Kaname (on many levels) the way it ends up needing to go down, but ultimately I think some it is stuff he needed to face and push through.  Running has been causing him too much trouble.  LOL of course Zero doesn't exactly have a walk in the park either... *winces again and hits Nasser a few extra times for what he did. Hands off, bub, that neck is Kaname's property!!!*

The whole chapter probably encompasses maybe a half hour or so of time in total, yet it still manages to be 26 pages long LOL*shakes head at herself*.  I swear it feels like this story will never let me finish writing it. ;P  Kaname and Zero are not quite out of the woods yet, but I didn't break it at too awful a place this time I think.

By the by, as a side note, it's funny how things write themselves sometime. I've gotten a lot of positive comments on this, but I actually had no original intention of creating a Aido x Seiren possibility. I'd never even thought about them as a pairing, but I will admit that as I've been writing their interactions I have found a totally unexpected chemistry there.  I'm not going play with it too much or push it too hard, but it is what it is and I'll probably leave it at that - a possibility (one of many dear Aido has I'm sure LOL - or rather, will have once we get his illness issues taken care of! o_o). 

The chapter title comes from the song "In the Middle of the Night" by Within Temptation.


Listen:

Read: Lyrics

Parts of that song work really well with Kaname's feelings in the chapter, especially these bits:

I’ve been walking this road of desire,
I’ve been begging for blood on the wall.
I don’t care if I’m playing with fire,
I’m aware that I’m frozen inside.
I have known all along.

So much more going on, no denying,
But I know I’m not standing alone.

You’ve been playing my mind through my wishes.
You can feel that we’re haunting the truth.
Don't know why, can't hold on, always losing control.

...
No more tears, no, ‘cause nothing else matters,
I’ve been closing my eyes for too long.
Only vengeance will make me feel better,
There’s no rest 'til I know that it’s done.

Another song that fits the general mood well for both Kaname and Zero is "Murder", also by Within Temptation.

Listen:

Read: Lyrics


AND!!!!  GASP!!! I have actually finally updated the Fanfiction Page here on my blog! XD  Sorry it's been so long and I'm sorry to anyone whose story I may have missed.


NEW OR NEWLY ADDED STORIES:
Competing on Ice - LeaNicolaie
Nutmeg - LeaNicolaie
Cross Academy Kindergarten - LeaNicolaie
Unavailable - LeaNicolaie
Buttermilk - LeaNicolaie
Find Your Wings - On-These-Wings
For The Past or For The Future? - On-These-Wings
The Unread Letter - On-These-Wings
Beyond My Reach - On-These-Wings
All in Good Time - On-These-Wings
24 hours - On-These-Wings
Kill Me Softly - PhoenixWhite1120
A Distant Memory and a Real Problem - KittySkywalker
Need - Ravyn Skye
Yuki's Kiss - Vamphire
Yuki's Heart - Vamphire
Misunderstanding - Vamphire
Mathematical Solution - sweetsour-bublegum
Wonderland - sweetsour-bublegum

As always, links to all those and more are over on my Vampire Knight Fanfic Recs page.  

I'm not including an "Updated Stories" list simply because there have been so many stories updated since the last time I updated my fic page that I've lost track of them all I'm afraid, and some would have been updated so long ago that I'm sure everyone's already read the updates anyway.  

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Oh my god!!! I suffered the whole chapter!! I even thought you would will Kaname or Zero! It was distressing! Thanks for updating, you do a great job, you're such a great writer!

The fic was really great. I definitely felt the struggle between the three vamps. Woah the suffering!

It was great to finally see Kaname using past against Nasser, and Nasser seeing that maybe the game will not always go by his rules! BIG, BIG 'Thank You' for this chapter! ^.^

Anon: Um... I'm sorry? ;) Thanks!!!


DANJSG1FAN: Thank you!


B-Rabbito: You're welcome and thank you! Yes! Nasser finally gets some of his own medicine. :D

I have been a fan of your fanfic series for a very long time! I have waited anxiously for each chapter and have to admit that you are my favorite fanfic author.

You have done a phenomenal job of staying true to all the VK characters and creating a VK world that's believable, exciting and sexy!!!

Great job on your current novel Secrets in Dark and especially your latest chapter. It was a fun read and I can't wait to see how your story ends!

Oh Gosh, oh GoshO_O THE ACTION!!!

Kaname finally worked trough his darkest moments and came out victorious *if slightly battered, but that was to be expected^^*

Zero took another level in Badass and made me drool on my keyboard*__* Ay Nasser, why would you think he would let you breathe for another 5 minutes after making that stupid, stupid move is beyond me. You SHOULD know BETTER, man>____>

Nasser... is still standing, but I have a feeling that with Zero in the mental/physical state he's in (and I guess he's running on pure, undilluted Badass right now, because he bleed out all the blood and consideration and REASON) it won't last long. I guess that Zero will go with his female lioness instinct now contrary to male lionXD - scaring and wounding the opponent? What? You KILL them into little pieces before they touch what's yours again>_____< Me gusta^_^

Hm, and what's Aido doing there? You're sick honey! Sweet and concerned, but sick as hell and you shouldn't be there! ...which means he'll have to do something/serve as proof of Nassers evildoings/make use of his brain later on, right? No rest for the wicked, lolXD

But, but, but... now that we know that Yuki was infected with something VERY similar to Aido - and maybe even the same thing - and the catalyst the 'poison' needed was Kaname's blood... which probably worked as well on Aido (given the fact he's getting steadily sicker)Won't he connect the dots and realise he's drank Kaname's blood? That would be... pretty awful - exactly what Kaname wanted NOT to happen. Or maybe the sickness is a signal that the poison is leaving his body?

What I want to know is... absolutely no chance for cat ears? *valiant attempt at puppy stare* XD

Hm, I never thought about Hana and Seiren - their characters are just too different and I can't really see them togetherO_o They do create a nice contrast, but don't really work well imho... given Seiren's profession and devotion to Kaname, she wouldn't want to compromise their positions - as them both being in Kuran's inner circle. And I always had that feeling of her being older than the rest of the "kids"XD And Aido is not exactly 'mature' on his best days.

I still want him to be happy with someone>_> Feels lonely that Hana is only one without a partner - and that his love prospects have that frustrating habbit of dying off on him=_____= Seriously!

...hell, his best fit would be Zero... who's taken already... BUT has a brother with a VERY alike character>_____> ...now I'm just scaring myselfXD I shall stop!

Now I just want Zero to neutralize Nasser (any way possible) and for Takuma to get the hunters and press off Kaname's back - making it look like it was Nasser's doing and the boys were just protecting themselves^_^ Takuma is smart and charming, he would make it workXD

OH! MY! GOSH!

This chapter was so suspenseful. It was unbelievably intense and I almost couldn't bear it. It was just so... SO.... AAAHHH!!! lol.
My eyes were literally watering like every five minutes from excitement and intense pride from loving these characters you have created.

As always your execution of these dramatic events was just wonderfully delicious!

"Kaname had learned from every bad experience in his life. Maybe that's why he was so clever." What a beautiful line, it's just so poignant.

Another one I especially loved was Kaname asking Nasser, "You see it now, don't you? You've forgotten that the knight is still in play." Just perfect and perfectly placed, and wonderfully satisfying.

And my heartbeat has increased to almost painful limits to see that Aido might soon be alright!!! lol

Anon: Thank you!! :) I'm so glad you like the story and find the characters believable and all, thanks!!



jeza.red: Yes, I think Zero's totally running on pure badass right now *snickers*. LOL SO TRUE! Yes, he's going to go very female lioness I'd say. :)

Poor Aido, fortunately I'm not going to do anything nasty to him just because he's on the scene ;) but it is important for him to be there because he needs to know the pieces that no one would ever have told him if he doesn't figure them out for himself. Aye, the two illnesses are much too similar for coincidence, ne? Aido's a bright boy and there will be some dot connecting I dare say, but it will all work out for the best in the end.

Yeah, I never really thought of Seiren and Aido before either, and like I said I've no intention to push it or try to make something out of it, but it is funny when things come up on you unexpectedly. LOL honestly I agree, I have always thought Aido's best fit was Zero... too bad he's spoken for. *is glared at by Kaname and tries to look innocent* 0:) HA! Oh-ho! LOL you're right, Zero does indeed have a twin... hmmm.... *gets a devious look on her face* XD



Kwon Benny: Thank you!! *grins happily and floats on air* I'm so glad you liked it and enjoyed those lines! Thank you!!

Zero is amazing*_* But Kaname is pretty awesome too, can't stay behind his lover, can he? *snicker* I want to see him kicking ass right and left at some point - he needs it imho, a catharsis of some kind to establish his badassness anew^^ He's the big, bad Kuran after all *What?! Stop staring at me, Kaname!*

Ooooh dot connecting, I like it^^ I like when you make them do those twisted leaps of logic that look so logical in the end and make me feel like a noob for not seeing stuff beforehandXD Aido is the man to go for these^^

Ah yeah, because you didn't kill off Ichiru... >____> *dodges bullets*
But it IS interesting to note how much Hana and Zero... just fit togetherXD Kaname should be happy he got there firstXD *easy with that fire! This shirt is new!*
I guess Zero's reaction to his brother dating his best friend would be pretty hilarious...*Seriously stop shooting!* I imagine him being something along the lines of:
"Sorry Ichiru, it's not that I don't trust you with Aido. I just don't trust you with Aido." XD

Hi! I'm new here, I love all your KanameXZero stories, they're amazing and I've read them all, love your way of writing. The plots are so interesting!
But I've got a question: have you ever going to write a story in which someone is going to steal away Zero From Kaname and not the contrary?I love Zero charachter, more than Kaname, and in my opinion, it wold be great to read about someone who try to steal zero from him, with something of romantically involved maybe. With your great writing skills it woould be a great story.
well, hope you could understand me, because English is not my mother tongue. :P I'M italian. but I had to do tthis request. ^^

Emerald.

Hi! I'm new here, I love all your KanameXZero stories, they're amazing and I've read them all, love your way of writing. The plots are so interesting!
But I've got a question: have you ever going to write a story in which someone is going to steal away Zero From Kaname and not the contrary?I love Zero charachter, more than Kaname, and in my opinion, it wold be great to read about someone who try to steal zero from him, with something of romantically involved maybe. With your great writing skills it woould be a great story.
well, hope you could understand me, because English is not my mother tongue. :P I'M italian. but I had to do tthis request. ^^

Emerald.

Just letting you know that i'm still reading and still LOVING this story!! If i get a spare moment i'll write a proper review! But it's amazingggg! Please update soon!! Love it!!

-Lenko

jeza-red: LOL quite true! They're both pretty awesome. :) Thanks! Yes, Aido is my favorite dot-connector. :D ROTFL! Oh man, yeah, I'm imagining all kinds of hilarious situations involving Aido, Ichiru and Zero now... *snickers*


Emerald: Hi!! Welcome to the insanity! ;) Thank you very much! LOL well I think that anyone trying to steal Zero from Kaname may not live too long... ;) Just kidding! It is an interesting idea. I don't have any plans for a story like that at the moment, but it would be fascinating to see how that kind of scenario would play out.


Lenko: Hi hon!!! I'm glad you're still reading and liking the story, thanks!!! *hugs*

Hi! Thank you for your answer! Please, please think about it,it would be great. I want to see angry kaname and possesive about Zero!

Emerald

Emerald: I will! And hey, you know that would make a great plot bunny to post on the new www.vampire-knight.net site if you wanted. :)

Thank you.hope to read the story soon^^
By the way, great new site!

Emerald

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