Citrus Overload ;)
I'm afraid I had a pretty bad day today and got some rather sad news as well, so I'm very down at the moment. That, combined with my normal neurotics about posting a new chapter is not a very good combiniation. I'm pretty sure the chapter totally sucks, is too lame, too weird, too lemony and too mushy. :( I hope I'm wrong and that you all can get some enjoyment out of it anyway, but if not and it is all of the above, then I'm sorry, please pardon, ignore or just totally skip the crappy writing and hang in there for better work in the future. *sighs and goes off to curl up and hide in a corner somewhere*
Secrets in the Dark by Blackened Wing (Zero x Kaname)
Chapter Eleven "To Turn your Tears to Roses"
You'll see when you read it why in this post I said this chapter fits with the lyrics to Skillet's "Whispers in the Dark" especially well.
Individual Review Responses here.
Sagakure did an AWESOME piccy after last chapter, that was inspired by the earlier lemon and this one and fits with the mood of this chapter very well. Click the thumbnail below to see the full image over on her site. Warning - full pic is NC-17 & contains graphic yaoi. :D
*drools* She is SUCH an amazing artist! *drowns in her own nosebleed* ;D
More Fanfic Updates...
UPDATED FICS:
Two Hearts Beat As One - Nineorchids
What About Us - kanshou87
Scattered Leaves - Sagakure
Cradle of Blood - Sagakure
In Silence - YenGirl
Entwined - Eilara
Sweeter than Sin - Kagamichihime
Links to all these stories can be found on the Fanfiction Page.
I haven't added any new stories at this time because I haven't had time this past week to read any. :( Hopefully I shall be able to rectify that soon! :)
Edit: Thank you to everyone who has been so sweet and concerened. I'm sorry for whining and making anyone worry, I'm fine, it's nothing serious, just one of those things, you know? Thank you all for being such sweethearts, I feel much better now, honest. :)
Labels: secrets in the dark, skillet, turn your tears to roses, vampire knight fanfiction, whispers in the dark
No worries AT ALL on the chapter, Vani, you've left me lacking in blood and saliva and grinning like a loon!
Sorry to hear you're sad *hugs you tightly to make up for it*
Posted by
YenGirl |
November 7, 2009 8:57 PM
Yen: Aww, thanks! *hugs tightly back and is relieved*
Posted by
Blackened Wing |
November 7, 2009 9:07 PM
Thank you for the update!!!!!! *dances* i haven't actually read it yet; but i am absolutely positive that you're completely wrong. It will be amazingly awesome as always!!!!!
I'm sorry about your sad news *hugs*
-Lenko
Posted by
Anonymous |
November 7, 2009 9:40 PM
Lenko: *hugs* Thanks for the vote of confidence! I appreciate it. :) I hope you liked it!
Posted by
Blackened Wing |
November 8, 2009 12:08 AM
i'm so happy for kaname and zero! XD fantastic lemons! i think my favourite would have to be the one in the bathroom. it's a temporary solution to kaname's trauma. he always freaks out when zero tries to take him because he starts imagining that it's someone else. but facing the mirror like that, there's no way he could possibly mistake zero taking him for anyone else XD
zero seem to be getting more and more into voyeurism, dontcha think? ;-) in the end of blood moon, he took kaname on the balcony, now he's taking him against the window. you go, zero!
i do wonder though, where are the house staff?
how sweet is that! XD a blanket of roses! zero, you sappy romantic!
Posted by
Anonymous |
November 8, 2009 1:15 AM
wow...*cough* i have just finished reading your amazing, AMAZING chapter. You need to stop apologising for lemons! You somehow manage to weave and progress the plot with them...more on that in my sure to be massively long review! haha.
It was beautiful; im SO happy that both Kaname and Zero had fun. *grins* especially Kaname, haha. Thank you so much for this update and as usual i am dying for the next one!!!! *thinks of potential plots*
-Lenko
Posted by
Anonymous |
November 8, 2009 3:01 AM
ooh, sorry! forgot to ask in the last comment. You touched on the fact that Kaname is slightly masochistic in this chapter, with the smacking and all. This seemed to surprise Zero, which surprised me, i thought he'd know that by now? Does this mean that this will become important in later chapters? When he gives Zero time to get used to it? *clamps mouth shut*
Stopping now! Sorry, can't review just yet and the thoughts are just swirling in my head! Anyways, thanks again!! *hugs*
-Lenko
Posted by
Anonymous |
November 8, 2009 3:41 AM
Anon: Thanks!! Yup, exactly, there was no way it could have been anyone else there. :) Hahah yes, Zero does seem to be, doesn't he?
Kaname probably sent the house staff home before Zero came back. I've decided they don't live in the main house, they've got their own quarters elsewhere on the grounds and know better than to be in the main house or anywhere near it after they've been dismissed. ;)
Yes, hehe he's a secret romantic after all! ;D
Lenko: *beams and hugs* Thank you, thank you thank you! I'm so happy you liked it and found it enjoyable!!
Well here's the thing, I don't think it's a surprise to Zero that Kaname can be a little masochistic, I'm sure by now he is well aware of that. It was more the fact that *that* particular action with the *cough* psudeo-spanking *cough* seemed to feel good to Kaname that surprised Zero.
It will be important in later chapters to realize that Kaname can have masochistic tendancies, definitely. That particular method won't necessarily come into play again in this story, but, um... *is endlessly perverted & kinky and has many little ideas for the future* if I stay inspired, I do have some ideas for what might happen once Zero gets used to it and/or once Kaname decides to show him why it feels good, etc. ;)
heheh *blushes* but, uh, probably not in this story, no. ;)
Thanks so much!
Posted by
Blackened Wing |
November 8, 2009 12:28 PM
here's hoping you stay inspired then!! ;) i truly hope you do, i love your stories.
-Lenko
Posted by
Anonymous |
November 9, 2009 3:12 AM
Lenko: Thanks!!! LOL and yes, I hope I do too, I have some rather ... *fun* ... ideas for the future... ;D
Posted by
Blackened Wing |
November 13, 2009 11:37 AM
Omg, that picture is sooo sexy!!! *majorrrrrr nosebleed* XDD!
Posted by
TheTornPiece |
December 5, 2009 1:16 AM